Friday, March 7, 2008

The Breeze Comments

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Up and up the breeze flew,
Up to the sky, up so high,
This breeze you see, wanted to be somewhere,
Somewhere were no one would dare,
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Rachel Rudland
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Simplistic & succinct, yet compendious & creatively eloquent in tone & poetic measure.Nice Work! ~ FjR ~

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