The Breeze Comments

Nature! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

why doesn't the breeze just wait till Spring and blow them back on? it would save the tree a lot of work making new ones. bri ;)

Hi Clarence I would love a poem in the Jamaican dialetic, This poem is wonderful. I love the wonder of an autumn breeze. I like writing poems about autumn. You can see An Autumal Lyric or Autumal Renaissance if you want to read my stuff. However I can speak this wonderful dialect. Let it go and give me something and write a letter when you do. Peace, Paul

Such a beautiful song, a sweet song, breeze that blows away the pressure (dried and old leaves) from the tree so that tree can rejuvenate and regrow green leaves.Marvelous observation of a nature.

LOL, a fun poem to read. ' The breeze serves its purpose' And every year I'm sure the breeze blows all those leaves into my yard to rake.

fantastic observation turned into fantastic narrative

The poem deals with the natural facts about trees and related changes in trees on subjects which is a true and clear picture on nature. I think that this is a wonderful poem and took this opportunity to read and enjoy several times particularly the repetition of ending sentences....

A creative and compelling composition on one of the functions breeze. Well done my friend!

Falling leaves make way for snow Trees can't grip leaves and snow. Very, very wonderful poem shared really. Autumn's breeze is amazing and wonderful really.

This is a beautiful poem. I like it! And I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

I gave it ten Clarence! ! Nice work.

This poem is a very good example for me and i will try to write in your rhythm really Thank for your poem Clarence Prince. Sophy Chen

I do agree with you, Clarence. The subtle breeze has its own purpose, like any breeze or storm coming our way serves its purpose to strengthen us who is walking on the way...

Beautiful poem with vivid imagery as the season changes the autumn breeze blows the leaves off the trees is a pleasure to see the beauty of the autumnal carpet!

The breeze will help trees in Autumn to Spring time. Very wonderful imagination shared in this poem. Nice job.

wonderful poem on autumnal breeze ..cool..yet autumn is the season as per the poet old leaves are falling and breeze that help them to fall..a season for change over, a season for decoration..reading this Keats Ode on same title, I remembered as it came in my mind nice poem thank you

Trees in Florida are trimmed of their leaves before each hurricane season- And for the very same reason! I like this poem- especially for its rhythmic Jamaican lilt! Thank you Clarence!

There is no reason to suppose The breeze serves its purpose Very well said, those lovely words!

this is a beautifully written poem depicting the breeze. (I think this would make a lovely song)