Sunday, November 3, 2013

The Breath Of The Moon Comments

Rating: 4.6

There was nothing to hear...
But the breath of the moon,
Exhaling and erasing any and all burdens
I had decidedly hurried
...
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 01 February 2014

Delighting all of the senses... not even the taste of the breath of the moon escapes my imagination... as, by your pen, it gently kisses me... I love this poem...

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Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2013

I like the romantic ambiance of this poem: 'While I slept With no fear, no formula... After frolicking, in a wee hour garden That twinkled with tinsel Romancing this poet's pen...' It's beautiful and pure romantic. 'Asking me to slow dance On the crimson carpet of Fallen leaves...there, In the vivacious breeze' Wonderful!

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Danny Draper 05 November 2013

Romance of place and its celestial reach that lit this faint atmosphere and magic of trans season. Fineness stained pages.

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Susan Lacovara

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