Wednesday, March 26, 2008

The Breath Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I only realised the massive impact of you in that one breath
I drew it in, never ending and the red cells quaked at the ready
It flew into my lungs and the message was too much
My body reeled at its depth and shied from it's power
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Mick Law
power sick
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Ernestine Northover 03 April 2008

I held my breath reading this one, and sighed with contentment at the end. Very moving piece. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mick Law

Mick Law

Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
Mick Law
Mick Law
Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
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