Monday, October 15, 2018

The Breaking Of Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sunrays
tickle the clouds;
laughingly
they spread into the sky,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 September 2022

A unique poem..

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 October 2018

strong volition - my heart's intended to remain intact: /// nice poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2018

I break the clouds around my heart, with the humming hammer of my thought, —...touching expression with metaphor. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Kostas Lagos 15 October 2018

Beautiful. Really beautiful poem!

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