I quite liked this poem, and it made me laugh at the end with the line about a pickled onion in a bottle. Yes, the hollowness of victory when there is no one to share it with. A poignant reminder. Nice work.
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I quite liked this poem, and it made me laugh at the end with the line about a pickled onion in a bottle. Yes, the hollowness of victory when there is no one to share it with. A poignant reminder. Nice work.
Thank you Briony.Your words of support are wonderful Cheers.Geoffrey.