Friday, March 27, 2015

The Breakdown Comments

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‘I don’t remember a year like this, ’
She stood by the window pane,
Staring into the murk and mist,
‘All that it does is rain!
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David Lewis Paget
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Barbara Reiff 27 March 2015

Yes, I can see your character wishing he was dead...if he took the responsibility for his lovers madness. However, I did not find this to be the case in this sensitive write. Unfortunately, to some, the Sun never rises. You are multi-faceted DLP.......

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David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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