Wednesday, September 9, 2009

The Break Up 'Or' Patch Up (Confused) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal drops, at the red branch
of the slow autumn at my window,
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Tai Chi Italy 09 October 2009

Sounds like a Patch Up to me VG! So sweet to think you can control that love in your heart! A glorious expression of what love does to us though...you have got it bad, or good, and that is the way it comes. Smiling at you Tai

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O'pateng Joy 20 September 2009

Great poem...

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Obinna Eruchie 11 September 2009

A dramatic piece you have penned.

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Danny H 10 September 2009

Very good poem. but id prefer if someone stoppped loving me little by little, if its the love im in right now, i couldnt love them little by little it would be so hard to forget them

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Dislocated Heart 10 September 2009

Very nice... I was kinda in that situation...

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