Monday, June 7, 2010

The Break-Up Comments

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It starts in the depths of my soul
With time, the feeling grows
And eventually begins to show
Something I can’t keep in check, hold in tow
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Tatyana 'Churlish Cherub' Almeida
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Rahul Aithal 25 July 2010

Beautifully worded. Rahul.

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 16 July 2010

wow...thats kinda deep....read cannot let go on my list and compare and contrast if u like

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 16 July 2010

Very nice please the people need to see more

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Edder Ramirez 14 July 2010

i love it its so awesome

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Jayne Carpenter 14 July 2010

very well written, i 2 have been there..

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Love growing cold... well written concerning an inevitable break up.; D

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Jake H 07 June 2010

I REALLY like this one. And i agree with you on almost every point; been there before.

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