Tuesday, October 20, 2015

The Break In Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

Wish I could freeze time, and
listen to a hundred songs by the sea
with the waves whooshing noiselessly
dancing to my tunes.
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Merin Sabu
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Chinedu Dike 05 November 2015

Your poem insightfully portrays the peace most people seek when they visits beaches, especially during vacations. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Merin. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

Nice dreaam - to freeze time when you are on vacation or like that!

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Merin Sabu 20 October 2015

I guess i'm a slob..i want my life to be like that..!

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