Saturday, April 14, 2007

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A mighty enemy was amassing all its murderous hands.
Filled with the covetous – its ranks were vast and swelled.
The tyrants seeking foreign wives and slaves and lands
Focused now on what message the animal entrails spelled.
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Daniel Partlow
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Daniel...this is sterling work...Crisp, and mellifluous structure. Good writing is an employment of some good catch-phrasage or Title, that initially brings the Reader to your work. Great writing is the ability to take the Reader within your work...bathe them in it & hold them pleasantly captive til, you say they can leave....You have achieved this here, Daniel.Job well done.

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Daniel Partlow

Daniel Partlow

St. Louis, MO > Westport, CT
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