Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Brave Champion Comments

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I reached out
And had my hand confused
Between my inhaler
And cigarettes
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Wyatt Wagner 23 October 2013

Hate it! You need to work on the beginning were you said I reached out And had my hand confused Between my inhaler And cigarettes As some men had themselves confused Between life And death I like to believe I am walking On thin ice Were I could die man On thin ice were you can die man thats wrong!

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