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Nice touching one.Thank you.

Hey H, this piece is really moving. As I was reading it, I found my heart rate speeding up. I think it had something to do with the way you structured it, made me sit on the edge of my seat. Another thing it brought to mind is a piece I've been working on for a while. I've actually finished it more than once, but it's still not where it needs to be. I've been revising it for 2 years now. Anyhow, this was the stanza your poem brought to mind: ' they painted the angels black and it wasn't about being ethnically correct or making a movement, it's because they're all dead inside and all they know of divinity is how well dark paint can reflect light.' Thanks for sharing this poem with us, it's incredible. Always, Amberlee

This is so powerful, Herbert. You have a unique voice. Very best wishes Chrissie

Ah, If life was onlyas black and white as the zebras. There's a lot here Herbert. I like it. Very nice poem.