Saturday, May 6, 2006

The Boy With Fire In His Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.6

The boy with fire in his eyes
Stands there waiting.
It is his soul inside;
It keeps him standing.
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Daniel Nairn
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Rajesh Thankappan 31 December 2014

It is important that we put the talent that God has given to good use. Enjoyed.

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Jake Fedor 24 April 2007

Nice I may not be a great poet but you really were able to convey the good and bad of fire into one poem which is always good. I myself am a pyro and who knows alot about fire and you portrayed it beautifully.

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Kelsey Kay 24 April 2007

Very good. I personally am a pyro, and you conveyed fire well.

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Goldy Locks 28 August 2006

amazing, blazing write. it is so important to keep that fire in your heart. it shines in your spirit & pierces the mist that clouds your eyes - as you said, perfectly. these ppl light the way for the world. keep it kindling! suberb write, Sus.

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Daniel Nairn

Daniel Nairn

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