The Boy Who Loves Me So Comments

Mild and weighty lines brilliantly rhymed. A pleasure to read, dear poet.

How are two people who care for each to achieve simultaneous stimulation, elation. It's vexed situation whether or not it is is mutual. I cannot imagine wiser or more helpful than yours.

perfectly scripted story of a honest love.. and that one needs a space.. good write. thank you for sharing.10+++

I think you are a song writer. This is very clear, but the English has to improve. I hope you won't be exploited by these 'boys' who say they love you, but will use you and then throw you away. Beware of teenage infatuation. Blessings. You have good song writing talent!