Overhead it beamed
like the fluorescent lights
of the life he was running away from
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An excellent portrayal of never losing sight of your dreams, holding onto hope and being undaunted by setbacks. A beautiful vision filled with creative imagery and giving an alluring thought to grasp onto. I too, loved the last stanza! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Very nicely envisioned. Excellent collocation. I like the last stanza very much. Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem. ....10
Thank you very much! Your encouragment is greatly appreciated. Much love.
Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction, in poetic diction. A good depiction of perseverance, hope and faith. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.