Tuesday, July 21, 2015

The Boy Who Chased The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Overhead it beamed
like the fluorescent lights
of the life he was running away from
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Victor Bucarizza
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Chinedu Dike 25 July 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction, in poetic diction. A good depiction of perseverance, hope and faith. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 21 July 2015

An excellent portrayal of never losing sight of your dreams, holding onto hope and being undaunted by setbacks. A beautiful vision filled with creative imagery and giving an alluring thought to grasp onto. I too, loved the last stanza! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Victor Bucarizza 22 July 2015

Thank you so much, I truly appreciate your kind words. Much love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2015

Very nicely envisioned. Excellent collocation. I like the last stanza very much. Thanks for sharing such beautiful poem. ....10

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Victor Bucarizza 21 July 2015

Thank you very much! Your encouragment is greatly appreciated. Much love.

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