Thursday, May 5, 2011

The Boy Stood... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The boy stood with his finger in the dike
The dike broke, the water rushed in
The boy washed out to sea.
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robert dickerson
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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