Friday, July 27, 2007

The Boy In The Attic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trapped within those walls
He sits there, so content
Never knows of all the things
So full of wonderment
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echo burke
COMMENTS
Frank Cannon 13 April 2008

Fantastic take on the breaking of boundaries. Innovative. Well done.

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Splendid read, I felt a bit sorry for the boy until the spider appeared on the scene and the story took off. Lovely, L&T

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purple moon 27 July 2007

what a splendid poem, as I was reading it I felt like shouting at the screen 'my god I am the boy in the attic', well done x, and an original idea.

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