The Boy At The Back Comments

A great poem, love the flow to it. A great write.

Very moving and poignant, graphic without being crude(not easy to do) .Kudos.

This is just so perfectly put together. Not straight away obvious, it unravels slowly to tell a story that although the subject is quite streamline, we all understand tgat moment of solitude despair and tears falling unnoticed to dissolve on cold concrete. An inspiring write, at the level that you have achieved I found myself querying the significance of November :) Thank you... Karen

I love this Martin... I hope one day I will be able to write like you. Inspiring

strong imagery... a problem well painted. great job!

This poem reminded me of my first day in school, and my phobia for math problems that made me sick in my stomach. It is very natural in the way it was written and the words effectively bring out the picture in the reader's mind. Wonderful!