Tuesday, June 22, 2021

The Boy And The Apple Tree - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

The boy shook the tree
Apples flecked with russet dots
And strong hint of pink
Rained down plopping and bouncing
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 21 July 2021

Wonderful and impeccable....thank u.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 June 2021

You've described this even better than a painting, I can just close my eyes and drift off! .......... Many blessings! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 29 June 2021

How deeply and beautifully heart warming! .. Such beautiful sentiment and feel! .. Endless 5 Stars! .....+++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 June 2021

Oh, This is so Awesome! .. Ever such beautiful imagery an feel! .. Again I feel understated, , , This is just so Wow! ..

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Varsha M 23 June 2021

This is just beautiful. Your explicit description of color makes look more jucier and attractive. I was taken back to the scene where this must be taking place.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 June 2021

Lovely, pleasant imagery of a beautiful autumn scene.

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Loved the poem. It is a fine piece picturing the nature splendid with ripe apples and the natural instinct of children to bring them down. If it is the picture in America here in India we can see children shaking the branches of mango trees

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Sandra Feldman 22 June 2021

A scene of innocence and beauty, painted to perfection.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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