Wednesday, March 10, 2010

The Box Comments

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I will put in the box:
A silky smooth feather from a pure white dove,
A great big armful of warm fuzzy love,
And a fluffy pink cloud, from the heavens above.
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Kim Davies
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Sean Williams 19 March 2010

Wow! Absolutely fantastic last verse - such a strong image.

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Sheldon Saluta 10 March 2010

i love your poem! the notion about treasuring something that is so special and something to keep that is deserving! the lines: 'I will place my box at the end of a rainbow, 'Til all the love and blessings grow. I'll know the magic has started to flow, When the box begins to sparkle and glow. Then, I'll dissolve my box into the ocean, And invite the Whole world to bathe in the potion.' bizarrely well polished!

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