A boulder, mossy
waited, for an eternity
submerged,
inside the shallows.
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Thanks Raynette, for your wonderful comments again. This poem was inspired by Pradeep's about boulders and tears. But it is me. Best wishes Herbert
Somehow this piece doesn't sound like you...and yet I think it works well and I like it. There is something about it so settled and quiet and peaceful. Good poem. Raynette
A very quiet and calming piece....as Raynette said it doesn't sound like you but is good none the less.