Friday, August 26, 2005

The Boulder Comments

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A boulder, mossy
waited, for an eternity
submerged,
inside the shallows.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 27 August 2005

A very quiet and calming piece....as Raynette said it doesn't sound like you but is good none the less.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 26 August 2005

Thanks Raynette, for your wonderful comments again. This poem was inspired by Pradeep's about boulders and tears. But it is me. Best wishes Herbert

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Raynette Eitel 26 August 2005

Somehow this piece doesn't sound like you...and yet I think it works well and I like it. There is something about it so settled and quiet and peaceful. Good poem. Raynette

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