Thursday, February 8, 2007

The Bottle Comments

Rating: 3.3

You may hide the bottle
Under your bed.
Hide it from the world
But not from your head.
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John Stroud
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Candy Larock 13 February 2007

I like the way it flows. It really keeps your interest and wanting to know what is next.

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Daniel Tyler 09 February 2007

A good piece, John, very thoughtful. Just take out the good before graces to make it flow a bit better.

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Alison Smith 08 February 2007

Nice work on this addiction.... Alison

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