The Bottle In My Head Comments

Relatable. and a good poem, I must say

And air is gradually being let in.

It is in life. a bottle of mystery and darkness and fear, every such thing mostly disappears when its lid opens fully. beautiful poem

Throw out the bottle and make it disappear And be free.... yes, we must throw the bottle containing despair, frustrations, disappointments, anger, malice and violence etc. Great theme. It is a marvellous poem having positiveness. Many thanks dear Dankaro, keep the ball rolling....10

Awnnn! just like you wrote 'bout me.

a lovely poem with a different theme presented in a nice poetic form, thanks for sharing.

Throw out the bottle and make it disappear Well penned..