Tuesday, October 28, 2008

The Bottle Comments

Rating: 5.0

you see the bottle,
and don't know what to do
you want some,
but you don't know what will happen to you
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sarah honey
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Angelica Skye 29 October 2008

This an honest, well written piece, keep writing :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 October 2008

alcohol takes away one's sane thinking and when intoxicated anything he can do. Good poem that should awaken atleast some

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