Sunday, August 27, 2017

The Book Of My Life Comments

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Open me, don't be afraid
Lift my pages and read me
Be gentle when you turn my pages
Don't tear at my edges
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Bri Edwards 29 March 2019

check spelling line 10 :) is this a poem from your 'heart'? are you seeking more readers of your poems, in some of which you reveal yourself? ? now, i AM curious! ! and i shall read you more than in the past...if i don't forget! to MyPoemList. and maybe to a showcase some month, using poems from many parts of Asia, not the Indian Subcontinent (which i've already featured once) . bri :) very nicely done

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2018

Open me! ! ! Do not judge what you find unpleasant in me! Nice piece of work. Yes! ! No one is perfect! We are all trying to do our best on earth. With mistakes along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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