Sunday, May 5, 2013

The Book Of Fate Comments

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Sit here and talk to me sweetly, my love,
Like the hummingbird talks to the flowers
To extract the sweet nectar that he so loves
When he visits in the early hours
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Lora Colon
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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

nice write Lora. kiss me long and deep my love it's your lips that bring life to my soul. lovely.

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Kevin Halls 12 May 2013

A well written poem Lora and I also enjoyed your Hummingbird poem too. You have a nice unique style similar to Val Doren on this site. Keep it up!

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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