Thursday, April 15, 2010

The Book At The End Of The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can compare the beauty of my life in a rainbow
And I will laugh and day “oh”
‘Cause it’s perfect to have a comparison
Because my life is so colorful like the rainbow with reason
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2010

Very nice...these lines are good 'Like burning rays of RED… My life has many gallons of strife But I used to stand firm from it'

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Auty Paul Jason 20 April 2010

There was a book with so much thing, like pandora box. But, at the end he hide it. I love poem with good ending. Fantastic!

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Allan Macli Borges 17 April 2010

brilliant and colourful poem. perfect to raise a sad mind to honest laugh. thank you.

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Eyan Desir 16 April 2010

wow a book with so many colors good write

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Ken E Hall 16 April 2010

A colourful look at your feelings using the rainbow...novel poem regards

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 April 2010

good comparisons i think... please don't stop inviting me.... thanks!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 April 2010

This poem reveal so much about the cosmos/heavens...you colored moods beautifully but there can be no rainbow without the storm/rain.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 15 April 2010

Speak of wonders wandering you have brought them to the forefront...with your transition of Gods rainbow...you write very well young man...and your heart speaks well of the hidden world...which is within yo...keep sharing Sheldon....keep sharing...vey good write...very good...

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nice rhythm sir.. very nice write

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