I can compare the beauty of my life in a rainbow
And I will laugh and day “oh”
‘Cause it’s perfect to have a comparison
Because my life is so colorful like the rainbow with reason
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There was a book with so much thing, like pandora box. But, at the end he hide it. I love poem with good ending. Fantastic!
brilliant and colourful poem. perfect to raise a sad mind to honest laugh. thank you.
A colourful look at your feelings using the rainbow...novel poem regards
good comparisons i think... please don't stop inviting me.... thanks!
This poem reveal so much about the cosmos/heavens...you colored moods beautifully but there can be no rainbow without the storm/rain.
Speak of wonders wandering you have brought them to the forefront...with your transition of Gods rainbow...you write very well young man...and your heart speaks well of the hidden world...which is within yo...keep sharing Sheldon....keep sharing...vey good write...very good...
Very nice...these lines are good 'Like burning rays of RED… My life has many gallons of strife But I used to stand firm from it'