Friday, November 16, 2018

The Bonfire. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Who sings a serenade in dark!
Like a sudden spark
Of radiance
In vast streches of
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Valsa George 19 November 2018

Get immolated in this conflagration of radiance and blaze like a star! A very powerful expression of self illumination!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 November 2018

Thanks madam for reading and giving such a lovely comment.

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Hazel Durham 18 November 2018

Deep and thought-provoking poem, we are capable of destroying ourselves! Great write!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 19 November 2018

Thanks dear poet for such lovely comment.

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Asochya Sidhatapa 17 November 2018

It burns itself Keeps burning MY SELF Nice lines.

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Ansuman Srichetak 16 November 2018

Nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhakti Sharma 16 November 2018

The spark of fire Slowly turns A bonfire It burns itself It keeps burning my Self Thanks for sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 16 November 2018

It burns itself It keeps burning my sef

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