Thursday, March 1, 2018

The Bonds (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd break away and shake off the fright,
I'd flee and be gone, not being its prey;
Why should one fear so, of going astray,
When Fate catches the thread of every kite...
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 March 2018

Fright should be broken and shaken. Fate catches the thread of every kite and this is very interesting. A nice expression of faith motivates mind in this lovely poem. This is excellently penned...10

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Perdita Young 01 March 2018

Rhyme Scheme: ABBA,ABBA,CDE,CDE.

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