The mystery of the thirsty eyes
entered into the secret gate
yet to be discovered the path am looking for..!
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A nice poem. 'I know the destiny is uncertain but love to weave the stairs behind the elegance of a moon'... Beautiful!
Beautiful depiction of love as might spiritual experience - a voyage of bliss that affects one profoundly, with articulated and insightfully brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Deb.
Awesome poem, the bond of eternity is what we all long for, the flow of poem and the choices of words makes it more delightful for the readers, Full marks..10+++++
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behind the elegance of a moon Wish to have a calm; fair and innocent walk around the mysterious world leads to the bond of eternity...wonderful write by imagery and metaphors to utter nuance of subtle love, copiously inspiring,10++, thanks for sharing
Thank you so much dear poet for your valuable inspirations and lovely comments.
A bond of eternity with your thirsty eyes, jovial face and a fluoroscent heart.........what a nice contemplation dear poetess......romanticism playing the flute for your heart-throbbing thoughts...10 marks to you..
I know the destiny is uncertain but love to weave the stairs behind the elegance of a moon Wish to have a calm; fair and innocent walk around the mysterious world leads to the bond of eternity..... Excellent Nilima. Carry on. I request you to go through my poems and add your valuable comment. Thank you.
I have calmly gone through your lines. Repeated thrice with some other. Your thought on soul, heart and eternity- all are highest topics to feel and culture.Written so beautifully.10+
thank you so much dear poet. Your comments inspired a lot.