Monday, May 23, 2016

The Bond Of Eternity Comments

Rating: 4.5

The mystery of the thirsty eyes
entered into the secret gate
yet to be discovered the path am looking for..!
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Nilima Deb
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 16 September 2017

I have calmly gone through your lines. Repeated thrice with some other. Your thought on soul, heart and eternity- all are highest topics​ to feel and culture.Written so beautifully.10+

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Nilima Deb 25 March 2018

thank you so much dear poet. Your comments inspired a lot.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 April 2017

A nice poem. 'I know the destiny is uncertain but love to weave the stairs behind the elegance of a moon'... Beautiful!

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Nilima Deb 25 March 2018

Thank you so much for your kind pen.

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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2017

Beautiful depiction of love as might spiritual experience - a voyage of bliss that affects one profoundly, with articulated and insightfully brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Deb.

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M Asim Nehal 13 August 2016

Awesome poem, the bond of eternity is what we all long for, the flow of poem and the choices of words makes it more delightful for the readers, Full marks..10+++++

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Nilima Deb 14 August 2016

Thank you very much for your kind visit and liking and also for 10 +++++. :)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 July 2016

behind the elegance of a moon Wish to have a calm; fair and innocent walk around the mysterious world leads to the bond of eternity...wonderful write by imagery and metaphors to utter nuance of subtle love, copiously inspiring,10++, thanks for sharing

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Nilima Deb 09 July 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your valuable inspirations and lovely comments.

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 May 2016

A bond of eternity with your thirsty eyes, jovial face and a fluoroscent heart.........what a nice contemplation dear poetess......romanticism playing the flute for your heart-throbbing thoughts...10 marks to you..

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Nilima Deb 25 May 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your touchy comments and appreciation.

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Sriranji Aratisankar 23 May 2016

I know the destiny is uncertain but love to weave the stairs behind the elegance of a moon Wish to have a calm; fair and innocent walk around the mysterious world leads to the bond of eternity..... Excellent Nilima. Carry on. I request you to go through my poems and add your valuable comment. Thank you.

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Nilima Deb 24 May 2016

Thank you.Sure dear friend.

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