Sunday, May 10, 2009

The Bomb Comments

Rating: 3.9

Because...
you shouted and turned the phone off...

My eyes burn like an erupting volcano
...
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Fabulous strong imagery and wow! you sure get your message across - and how! Great powerful poem Joan. 10 Karin Anderson

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Catrina Heart 10 May 2009

Anger have this poem all throughout shouting in the sky.......Great similes used as anger flowed through the lava of a volcano.........Thanks! ! !

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