Thursday, September 28, 2006

The Boatman Comments

Rating: 4.3

I stood on the bank of a dark, deep river
A boat was crossing over, poled by a man
Though hooded and cloaked, I knew it was no woman
'I am Charon', he said, as the boat came to land
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Tailor Bell 28 September 2006

very captivating scenario...i felt the last line slightly reduces the momentum of the work IMHO, but overall quite powerful. great read. -Tailor

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