The boat needs caulking
All hast gone and I am behind the road,
It ends with no footing onwards and backwards,
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The sun is falling with the calling of drakes On the azimuthal darkness. The light from the eyes is subdued and the voice in inaudible incantation beckons the The shore beyond.
A fine, flowing extended metaphor relating your life to a boat which needs caulking. Life can be so fragile, as you brilliantly imply.
The light from the eyes is subdued and the voice in inaudible incantation beckons the The shore beyond.