Thursday, August 31, 2017

The Boat Needs Caulking Comments

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The boat needs caulking

All hast gone and I am behind the road,
It ends with no footing onwards and backwards,
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Prabir Gayen
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Rudra Mondal 12 June 2020

The light from the eyes is subdued and the voice in inaudible incantation beckons the The shore beyond.

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Meethi Mondal 26 May 2020

The sun is falling with the calling of drakes On the azimuthal darkness. The light from the eyes is subdued and the voice in inaudible incantation beckons the The shore beyond.

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Michael Walker 14 July 2019

A fine, flowing extended metaphor relating your life to a boat which needs caulking. Life can be so fragile, as you brilliantly imply.

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