Monday, January 22, 2007

The Boat I Sail Comments

Rating: 4.9

I'm looking into a picture of a turbulent stormy sea,
And imagining I am battling against its wild fury.
The winds are whipping cruelly around the boat I sail,
Lashing it with salt spray, hurricane and gale.
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Ernestine Northover
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Chuck Audette 31 January 2007

Wonderful wordsmithing, I was awash in powerful images. You've gotten me curious - what was the painting that was so inspiring? A Winslow Homer, perhaps? -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 25 January 2007

A power-packed stream of excitment, full of heroic energy and atmosphere, Well done again Ernestine! Love duncan X

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Patricia Gale 22 January 2007

Life and nature can relate so well together..... outstanding imagery here Ernestine.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 January 2007

Only one thing more eloquent than the craftwork executed in this poem... And that would be the Atisan who has created hundreds of such Poems... And that be you, young lass... F. j. R.

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Terrance Woolridge 22 January 2007

Cool

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