The Boat Comments

You have painted a very rich imagery of a boat overturning and yet hope breathing!

the moral is weather changes, the sea is large, the boat is small

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines... With the shaking life lying beside, Still breathing softly, Trying to rejuvenate for another voyage To the island of dreams! You have portrayed truth of life in a very beautiful way. Very true said, even if storms had turned the boat upside down, still the life is breathing and preparing its mind for next voyage. Loved the way you presented it. Very well deserved poem of the day. Congrats!

It's a nice and pretty poem.

Your writing style reminds us to bring vivid description and detail to our work. I appreciate that about your composition.... We've all been in this Boat, haven't we, on this maelstrom-journey in and out of dreams. Thank you for ending on a tenacious note. So long as we are living, we shall forge ahead - great message.

Congrats' on having this poem chosen as 'Poem of the day'. Well-deserved. Thanks for sharing! !

A great poem with such wonderful clarity of events a boat tragedy in such an adverse climate in ocean.

Congratulations! You deserve this.

Very live like description. Liked it much

Oh! The unchanging change of weather. A very brilliant work of art. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful work! You succeeded in bringing to our mind the difficulties man encounters on his daily voyage. I like thepoem. Kudos!

A beauty, a work of art, a ell deserved poem of the day. Congrats.

Marvelous portrait of a rel life situation. What a pathetic eventuality. Boat being the sole base to all what matters in this episode, I congratulate you for giving the poem most appropriate title to it. Very touching poem!

beautiful ink.end in a hope to start the journey again.liked it.

island of dreams, I like it. my breath is here. thanks.

Now this i like very much... you express so well the rugged cruelty of the sea in paradise then the calm after the storm as peace tries to regain its composure and a life its breath... lovely tyvm karen

The Boat, yes I like it. Truly imaginary.

lovely.reminded of old man & sea

well written i find it to be very creative an excellent piece

great imagery, nicely written, enjoyed it, thank you.