Monday, March 5, 2018

The Bluebird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Piercing and chilling is the Mocking Bird's first song,
Until hundreds of other birds join the throng
Shrilling and Singing their songs attract my gaze,
All of the birds, each and every one, can amaze.
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Emily Howard
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Emily H. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Seamus O Brian 05 March 2018

Welcome, Emily! I enjoyed reading your first submission to PH. The narrative style carries much wisdom for us all to contemplate and practice. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2018

Welcme to PoemHunter. Cheerful attitude of a bluebird is beautifully expressed in this excellent poem. This carries observation and emotion. The Mocking Bird's first song motivates many other birds. Bluebird sings songs of life and death. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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