Sunday, November 12, 2017

The Blue Wingback Chair Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blue wingback chair
Nestled into the corner
Of our living room
So old and worn out
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Shaun Cronick 24 July 2020

A beautiful poem and beautifully well written and presented Rose Marie. A poem that reaches in and touches every readers heart and soul. 10+ and I wish you well and keep writing, keep writing.

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Lyn Paul 21 November 2019

A beautiful poem Rose Marie. Your words are captivating.

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Ruth Walters 30 July 2019

So the chair has good and bad memories for you. At first I thought it a sad chair, where you were punished but then it became a lovers chair so happy endings.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2019

This is a wonderful poem with delicate poetic expression! The last stanza is utterly fascinating! My pleasure revisiting this fabulous poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 June 2019

A most beautiful poem, full of memories, the saddest occurrences but also the sweetest one: your first kiss with your first love, wow, that's truly a greatest moment to remember, I am so shy that I am blushing while reading this tenderly worded poem.That memory forever etched in your mind, how touching and sweetest rendered.10+++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2019

Wrapped in a cocoon Of soft blue silk And the wonderful memories Of yesteryears... kiss and unfettered desire.. very fine poetic expressions dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

Whenever I remember My first kiss In the blue wingback chair It evokes pleasure Of knowing the first real taste Of pure unfettered desire With my first love.........nice poetic expression, much impressive.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

Rose Marie, a beautifully crafted write. An unexpected ending but so precious. +++10 Robert.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 April 2018

The last stanza is a little confusing but over all the poem is beautiful and nice.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 April 2018

It was my stronghold! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2018

It's a lovely poem Rose! I agree with the comments of all esteemed poets! The last stanza is really really beautiful...so practical! Thanks for sharing! .........10

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Aya Sunga Askert 04 January 2018

Wrapped in a cocoon Of soft blue silk......poetically rendered. This wonderful poem brings me back to my childhood. I could still recall our worn-out rocking chair. Thank you Rose for a piece of nostalgia.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 January 2018

Thank you so.much for the great comment, Aya. I am so pleased I was able to evoke such nostalgia.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

i find Kumarmani's comments too amazing to be believed/trusted! ha ha. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 November 2017

Thank you, Sir for proofreading my poem. It was fortunate I had the time to go over with my poems today and I was able to read your comments. Thank you. Thank you. Your visit is highly appreciated.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

It was whereI cried.................. and: The best memoryI have ever had and: WheneverI remember.............. i'll bet PH stole the spaces which belong in front of the Is! ! I could lay for ages........lie? common error but, other than the above, i liked the poem. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2017

It is a beautiful poem on love and memories having stunning expression and nice collocations. The last stanza is more remarkable. The beginning is fantastic and amusing. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2017

Thank you Kumarmani. Your amazing comment is always a treasure.

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Paul Brookes 14 November 2017

Things hold memories like soft cocoons of blue silk. I wonder when it pass to someone else will it still hold the essence of you. A beautiful and thoughtful write 10 ++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2017

I never thought about that. A very nice thing to ponder over. I really appreciate you having time to read the poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 13 November 2017

O, this is so lovely! No matter how many other memories that chair evokes, the last stanza is the perfect closure: and the greatest of all memories!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2017

Thank you for your kind words. Glad to have such faith.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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