The blue wingback chair
Nestled into the corner
Of our living room
So old and worn out
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So the chair has good and bad memories for you. At first I thought it a sad chair, where you were punished but then it became a lovers chair so happy endings.
This is a wonderful poem with delicate poetic expression! The last stanza is utterly fascinating! My pleasure revisiting this fabulous poem!
A most beautiful poem, full of memories, the saddest occurrences but also the sweetest one: your first kiss with your first love, wow, that's truly a greatest moment to remember, I am so shy that I am blushing while reading this tenderly worded poem.That memory forever etched in your mind, how touching and sweetest rendered.10+++++++
Wrapped in a cocoon Of soft blue silk And the wonderful memories Of yesteryears... kiss and unfettered desire.. very fine poetic expressions dear poetess. thank u. tony
Whenever I remember My first kiss In the blue wingback chair It evokes pleasure Of knowing the first real taste Of pure unfettered desire With my first love.........nice poetic expression, much impressive.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Rose Marie, a beautifully crafted write. An unexpected ending but so precious. +++10 Robert.
The last stanza is a little confusing but over all the poem is beautiful and nice.
It was my stronghold! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
It's a lovely poem Rose! I agree with the comments of all esteemed poets! The last stanza is really really beautiful...so practical! Thanks for sharing! .........10
Wrapped in a cocoon Of soft blue silk......poetically rendered. This wonderful poem brings me back to my childhood. I could still recall our worn-out rocking chair. Thank you Rose for a piece of nostalgia.
Thank you so.much for the great comment, Aya. I am so pleased I was able to evoke such nostalgia.
i find Kumarmani's comments too amazing to be believed/trusted! ha ha. to MyPoemList. bri :)
Thank you, Sir for proofreading my poem. It was fortunate I had the time to go over with my poems today and I was able to read your comments. Thank you. Thank you. Your visit is highly appreciated.
It was whereI cried.................. and: The best memoryI have ever had and: WheneverI remember.............. i'll bet PH stole the spaces which belong in front of the Is! ! I could lay for ages........lie? common error but, other than the above, i liked the poem. bri :)
It is a beautiful poem on love and memories having stunning expression and nice collocations. The last stanza is more remarkable. The beginning is fantastic and amusing. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Kumarmani. Your amazing comment is always a treasure.
Things hold memories like soft cocoons of blue silk. I wonder when it pass to someone else will it still hold the essence of you. A beautiful and thoughtful write 10 ++
I never thought about that. A very nice thing to ponder over. I really appreciate you having time to read the poem.
O, this is so lovely! No matter how many other memories that chair evokes, the last stanza is the perfect closure: and the greatest of all memories!
A beautiful poem and beautifully well written and presented Rose Marie. A poem that reaches in and touches every readers heart and soul. 10+ and I wish you well and keep writing, keep writing.