The Blue Sea Comments
Walking barefooted
the sand tickles
sensing slowly
how it feels.
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A beautiful composition! The poem has certainly touced a creature who is me! 10! - Raj Nandy,25 Jul 08
'Gentle wind soothing/easing the soul/relieving the burden' I think is the heart of the poem, and ocean relieves some of that anguish related to living. Thanks.
Waves do not rest until it finds an understanding creature. From your poem it is revealed that the great search is still going on!
Great job! Good use of imagery...I can relate to this poem! I love writing about the ocean :) -zia
Amazing touch in your poem......it has a mammoth profundity.........keep going. Cate
Nature tickles, sooths and communicates with everyone but only a poets heart can understand it. This poem, though in different style has a Wordsworthian touch: There are sermons in stones And books in the running brooks. A very good poem. Thank you for sharing it.
a beautiful poem of immense depth...'the sand tickles sensing...' good play of words here...9
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8/3/2025 1:02:41 AM # 1.0.0
A very well written and lovely piece 10+ regards Tom