Sunday, July 9, 2017

The Blue Name Comments

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Taking a too narrow lane
Where turning would not do
Nor lifting a few chains
Often meeting an inner pain
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Marilyn Jean
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Terrance Woolridge 09 July 2017

The pain is real, Good write

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Terrance Woolridge 09 July 2017

nice write Marilyn. Thanks

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Marius Poet 09 July 2017

Thanks I am exploring creative writing about emotions my long term project. I am happy you like it :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2017

Tears! ! Inner pain! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Marius Poet 09 July 2017

Many thanks for liking this poem. I am feeling creative again in the last days

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