The Blue Lagoon Comments

A fabled love becomes a failed love. The moonlight on the lagoon is a beautiful image of wholeness, with Moonlight described as TEARS OF CRYSTAL LIGHT but now the moon hides in the clouds and and the moonlight cannot reach the still waters. Somehow their energizing love must be restored, it's a cosmic inspiration and we cannot be without its victory over the forces of darkness. But something has disrupted the harmony of the pair. How can they be restored?

Hi, this is really a good poem I think. Like it alot. Lyn