Thursday, March 10, 2022

The Blue Dot Comments

Rating: 5.0

We fight and annihilate
for sole proprietorship
to be a big shot for the speck of a spot
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Leaders who orchestrate and go into war to acquire territories must learn from the wisdom enunciated in this great poem. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Yes, people turn to savagery to increase their power and domain. Yet, life is just ephemeral and we live in just a small dot, making their conquer and power useless and futile.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Powerful, incisive and very thought provoking poem with a great title.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2022

You continue to amaze me with your profound poetry, Kevin! Outstanding!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

A terrific poem most powerfully worded Kevin........10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

Yes indeed! the world has become ' industries of slaughter' - Civilizations going haywire.... -

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

Man is so foolish and egoistic that he forgets that he is just a small dot in this vast universe.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Profound poetry, most pertinent writing, kind words, but emphatic narrative. " industries of slaughter " is really marvellous and forceful phrase.5 *s

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 March 2022

Mr. Patrick you are ahead by a century Bravo! let there be peace

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