Thursday, November 21, 2019

The Blizzard Comments

Rating: 4.7

Everything is snow
A monochromatic scene
Exposure brings death.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Valsa George 18 October 2020

Nature changes her contours and shape now and then! Sometimes she is seen draped in green color, sometimes she becomes multi colored and during winter she is dressed into a monochrome shade of white! Exposure to the snow without sufficient protection can turn fatal....! An excellent haiku! Full grade!

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Season and reason! Winter, Snow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 November 2019

If there is a blizzard, indeed when exposed to a blizzard, in many cases when one does not look for good shelter, it causes finally death. Blizzard? Better stay at home untill this is over. Magnificently conveyed. Thank you so much for telling us the great importances in life. A brilliant thought provoking cute poem. A 10 Full Score and much much more. God's Blessings for you.

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Anjandev Roy 22 November 2019

Brilliant, simply brilliant. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 November 2019

Snow staying put and pervading all under it.. like nature itself... everything is one with it.. I have never been able to experience snow personally/bodily. A couple of times I went for this but still... a miss. This poem enabled me to close the eyes and seethe scene. Lovely Haiku.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2019

Reminds me of the movie WINDCHILL. Beautiful haiku, dear ate Rose....10++

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Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2019

Rose Marie Juan Austin is writing wonderful short poems nowadays.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2019

I trace here physics of atmosphere... a wonderful scene presented so briefly but speaks volumes about the ambience....a great three liner...full marks!

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Shaun Cronick 21 November 2019

So simple pure and neat like the snow itself. Three majestic lines that sums up the unforgiving harshness of a bleak winter time setting. Thank you Rose Marie.! 0++ an added to my deep-freeze poem ice box.

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Kostas Lagos 21 November 2019

Nice depiction! Well written R.M.!

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Lyn Paul 21 November 2019

It sounds amazing. Though if you are not home and warm it would not be good. I have never seen snow. Thank you Rose Marie

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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