Saturday, April 11, 2009

The Blissful Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky was dark,
And there came a spark
I was so scared
To move, I did not dare.
...
Read full text

Maheshi Chhaya
COMMENTS
Marieta Maglas 15 July 2009

'' I knelt down in front of God And said ' Oh Lord, Please forgive me for my sins I promise I won't do such Things '' wonderful poem, penned with deep thoughts, wonderful feelings...10+++ from me

0 0 Reply
Wojja Fink 23 April 2009

hope you keep on singing in the sun and morning bliss hope you're still in heaven with no early morning mist........

0 0 Reply
Dr. Sonal Chhaya 15 April 2009

very well written...... waitin for some more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Dr. Lubna S. Khan 11 April 2009

hey....i kno this is just one of those fantastic poem u have in store! waiting for your new poems to be uploaded!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success