every word he spoke
was dipped in conviction
every nuisance of the body
spoke of his resolve
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Absolutely wonder full. ..deafening ears...wow ended in a masterly stroke what an aura u have created.. loved it ur debt these ten and cheers
This poem tells eloquently this long, long distances your crossed in poetry.........Wonderful composition. A matured style.
A very compassionate poem about the scholar, who can not see but is capable of seeing with mind.
From: Brett Ackerman To: Indira Babbellapati Date-Time: 8/31/2009 3: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: the blind me --- Really insightful comprehension here, Indira. This doesn't sound like your usual verse composition, But I truly had to go over it a couple times just to get the feel of it from a distance. You've made a different choice of words fit a mind set that carries so much subtle information into your subject matter that is more give and take of the soul. I'm still left thinking and wondering where you found this variation of style.
poignant.................................................................................
really superb.... regards sandhya