Monday, October 15, 2012

The Blind Eye Comments

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So empty I breathe short gasps,
Leaving places cold and untouched.
The void in which I live entraps,
Simply losing a mind fragmented.
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Titi Dale 18 October 2012

Hi Matt! I think this is a great poem. It expresses a lot. But I'm sure you are not like that it the poem. You are a really good poet! I look forward to seeing more of you in the future.

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