Monday, February 21, 2011

The Bleeding Soul On A Looking Glass Comments

Rating: 5.0

Break, break and let me break myself
From this cycle of ages and night
Let me trade with the dust of eternal time
These sparks and hours of glory;
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Abhay Vignesh Liginlal
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Rich in rhytym that is refreshing.

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Jenny Gordon 21 February 2011

Very fascinating, sober, and lofty. The images used are excellent in conveying the depth of the longing and struggle, ...concluding finally in glory out of a worthless war.....almost contradictory, yet so true. Excellent portrayal of living and the ultimate struggle.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 February 2011

Extremely beautiful poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. You have successfully and off course poetically proved your worth. The lines are sincere yet melodious. Great write.

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