Thursday, March 13, 2014

The Bleeding Smoke Of Love Comments

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Under the cloud where the velvet smoke bled,
'Love's a curse' the smiling soul said;
The blood in the dwarf's heart then froze,
When an indecisive liar presented her the rose...
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Awsaaf Ali
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Chinedu Dike 03 October 2014

Your poems are absolutely amazing. Will read all of them later. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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Shania K. Younce 24 March 2014

A very detailed poem. Well put. Bien!

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Hyderabad, India.
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