The Bleeding Paradise Poem by Drishika Shah

The Bleeding Paradise



Our heaven is treated like a bird in its cage,
its unable to walk on its own, as in old age.

I come from place known as heaven on earth,
but here our mothers mourn after giving birth.

Now this heaven is renamed "The bleeding paradise"
in India and pakistan half of our heaven lies.

My heart aches when i hear the cries,
Each day a couple of us dies.

You harass our sisters, you kill our brothers,
you leave us with our beloved silently dying father.

kashmir will rise and bloom like a flower,
with happy homes and families, it will never suffer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manisha Shah 22 July 2019

Superb my dear.keep it up.

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Trupti Shah 22 July 2019

Too good Drishika very well done

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Mahendra shah 22 July 2019

Wow Superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Nayan Shah 22 July 2019

Very deep thoughts, way to go drishika. Keep it up๐Ÿ˜Š

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Neha shah 22 July 2019

Superb Drishika . Keep it up ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Mahendra shah 23 July 2019

Wow Superb ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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Mahendra shah 23 July 2019

Wow Superb ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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Pradip Shah 22 July 2019

Beauriful thought.

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Manju Garg 22 July 2019

Well done beta๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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Varsha 22 July 2019

V.good drishika.god bless u

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