Thursday, July 5, 2018

The Bleeding Nation Comments

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Yes, we came from the north, the south, the west and the east
To stand as one nation with the one voice
From different tribes and tongues
Under the umbrella of peace
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Abel Efemini
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Abel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Onome john 06 July 2018

A very patriotic piece that can enrich unity. Abel keep writing, we need more

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Haidee Majola 06 July 2018

A patriotic cry from the heart. A cry of Africa really...challenging piece nice read๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2018

Except for a few verb tense errors (Have should be has) this was a well written and personal piece. Just keep writing, Abel.

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2018

An insightful rendition of words set aside for sober reflection. A beautiful patriotic poem, well conceived and nicely brought forth with brilliance. Thanks for sharing Abel and do remain enriched.

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Abel Efemini 18 July 2018

Thanks Chinedu dike

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